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Within stone circles
the ancient gods of the land
mock our ignorance
Published March 03, 2012
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... I can hear them laughing. Nice one.
wow, Patrick, this is so much more than just a haiku. a very evocative and haunting work, thank you for sharing.
Aye, methinks you have stumble upon a grain of truth, or something very like it here. Wowers. Impressive and haunting. Me likes all too well. Ah, evokes a sigh.
at last, the true meaning of the stone circles has been brought back to us puny mortals...great depth and insightful poem, Patrick...
A thoughtful read, that leads me to other questions and further pondering. The playfulness used when mentioning "the ancient gods" and how, though ancient, know more than we do...like I said, leaves me pondering and thinking, sir. Well done.
An exquisite gem, Patrick! More to it than meets the eye! A beautiful mystical write from your magic pen. So much we don't understand about the gods of old. So much wisdom which will never be ours, delightfully penned in word and visual detail. An indepth write, with much to reflect on. I like it very much and thank you for sharing. Blessings to you, dear friend....
Patrick this sums up the force and power felt in stone circles so very well. Amazing haiku.
Don't they just Patrick! Excellent Haiku! :) kath xxx
So true, Patrick. Brilliant haiku!
clever write... how true... good one!
Solid and enjoyable haiku.....Jerry (*_*)
Good one Patrick
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