Thirteenth Haiku
Within stone circles
the ancient gods of the land
mock our ignorance
yelena
wow, Patrick, this is so much more than just a haiku. a very evocative and haunting work, thank you for sharing.
wow, Patrick, this is so much more than just a haiku. a very evocative and haunting work, thank you for sharing.
Jenny Gordon
Aye, methinks you have stumble upon a grain of truth, or something very like it here. Wowers. Impressive and haunting. Me likes all too well. Ah, evokes a sigh.
Aye, methinks you have stumble upon a grain of truth, or something very like it here. Wowers. Impressive and haunting. Me likes all too well. Ah, evokes a sigh.
Raj Arumugam
at last, the true meaning of the stone circles has been brought back to us puny mortals...great depth and insightful poem, Patrick...
at last, the true meaning of the stone circles has been brought back to us puny mortals...great depth and insightful poem, Patrick...
nightmute
A thoughtful read, that leads me to other questions and further pondering. The playfulness used when mentioning "the ancient gods" and how, though ancient, know more than we do...like I said, leaves me pondering and thinking, sir. Well done.
A thoughtful read, that leads me to other questions and further pondering. The playfulness used when mentioning "the ancient gods" and how, though ancient, know more than we do...like I said, leaves me pondering and thinking, sir. Well done.
Marie
An exquisite gem, Patrick! More to it than meets the eye! A beautiful mystical write from your magic pen. So much we don't understand about the gods of old. So much wisdom which will never be ours, delightfully penned in word and visual detail. An indepth write, with much to reflect on. I like it very much and thank you for sharing. Blessings to you, dear friend....
An exquisite gem, Patrick! More to it than meets the eye! A beautiful mystical write from your magic pen. So much we don't understand about the gods of old. So much wisdom which will never be ours, delightfully penned in word and visual detail. An indepth write, with much to reflect on. I like it very much and thank you for sharing. Blessings to you, dear friend....
Fay Slimm
Patrick this sums up the force and power felt in stone circles so very well. Amazing haiku.
Patrick this sums up the force and power felt in stone circles so very well. Amazing haiku.
kath
Don't they just Patrick! Excellent Haiku! :) kath xxx
Don't they just Patrick! Excellent Haiku! :) kath xxx
La Finita
So true, Patrick. Brilliant haiku!
So true, Patrick. Brilliant haiku!
robyn selters
clever write... how true... good one!
clever write... how true... good one!
Gerard Lebel
Solid and enjoyable haiku.....Jerry (*_*)
Solid and enjoyable haiku.....Jerry (*_*)
Sandra Martyres
Good one Patrick
Good one Patrick
... I can hear them laughing. Nice one.