First Published 2008

Tumbledown Cottage by Keith Young.

Woodland Rendezvous

Thoughts, creamily flowing
Adhesively cling
Around all the places
Discovered last Spring

Leafy-bowered woodland
Stippled with shade.
Secretly carpeting
The bed we had made.

Covering with rustling
Leaf-sounds, our new love
Modestly hidden
By branches above.

Tumble-down cottage
Deserted and worn
Bore witness to passion
Where before there was none.

Re-finding these places
Was sad, as it seems
They conjure up pleasure
Now only in dreams.

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MoonBee
A Very Lovely and Wistful Read, Enjoyed Every Stanza for its Imagery and Sweet-Memories ... MoonBee
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Sandra Martyres
An enchanting poem bringing back nostalgic memories..this picture of the cottage makes the piece more picturesque and beautiful
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carol
a love gone, but alive in memory beautiful
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stevenstirk
Enchanting love, written in a magical and mystical way. This one has all the elements captured within. Lovely poem
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Perhaps a warm, heart-kissed sojourn back to a time when time seemed like forever & pleasantly frozen ? Fay, you continue to impress...your employment of pictorial parlance glitteres like Bowie's Ziggy Stardust ! FjR-2010
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Karin Anderson
Thoroughly romantic with nostalgic imagery to inflame the reader's heart. As I adore cottages andy your words are so captivating, of course I am captivated too! Love Karin
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wombat
Wonderfully soothing poem as the reader is led to dwell in their own memories. Hxx
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