Karmic Tango - 10

Karma is both , the begining and the end .....please enjoy this poem.



My brush strokes 
Captured on inertial canvas
hold the universe 
in a magnetic muse.

I take a metaphoric leap
when a closed mind lets
the light to come in 
from a window in timeframe.

My existence feeds
an epiphanic stimulus 
to the  active cogs 
that rotate the porter's wheel.

I get shaped into a vase 
only to be broken next moment
to mingle with the loose sands
that blind a theoritical world.

ritty patnaik
we mingle.....get lost in the five particles,from which we are born.amazing write.

Jenny Gordon
Wow. Too good and interesting with superb imagery and half elusive dance of life, all vessels on the potter's wheel, yet broken to shivers is....foreboding. La, this is marvelous and thought-provoking, a lovely and engaging offering. I like it very well.

Karin Anderson
Superlative vocabulary graces this beautifully crafted Karmic Tango and I enjoyed the process of change immensely. As always the imagery is superb and the last stanza is brilliant Niks!

Geetima Baruah Sarma
Enjoyed reading this wonderful composition!

Fay Slimm
We never made the web but everthing we do affects it. Karma shapes and then breaks - oh what magnificence to be part of it all. A potent verse Niks.

Raj Arumugam
very apt imagery, nikunj - especially in the 2nd last stanza...

Sandra Martyres
I certainly enjoyed this karmic tango of yours..imaginatively scripted - especially the concluding lines..bravo Nikunj!