She's the one

For new readers: I live with a naughty white cat. "Zora" is....was my daughter's former black mouse. "Humi" is her new one.



Hi, Mum !
I'll be spending
Carnival's weekend
at your house.

Well, I thought,
luckily she's not upset,
for Zora is gone.

A second call,
interrupted my mind:
"I'm coming with Humi.
She, too, is black!"

I gave a warning glance
to my sleepy cat.
Don't worry, he said,
for me, Zora is the only one,
miauuuuu........



Laura Inès Nùñez Cremades
(La Finita)

Simply Bono Razek
ah a write after my heart..I adore cats..so very mysterious...great poem -love the humor :))

Patrick McFarland
I've learned (after loosing a couple of birds and several pet mice) never to trust the word of a feline beast. No, nay, never. Good one Laura. A very enjoyable read : )

sensebreeze
So sweet, am taken by this. What a beautiful write.

Karin Anderson
As a cat lover I love the humor and charm of it all~

Иан Бoэн
Sweet and enjoyable to read.

carol
lol cats know fun read

Debs
Awwww lovely write. the Cats real cute.

narain, jay p.
Hreat write

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Delicious! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Jenny Gordon
Dandy, sounds like Sir Puss intends to be good, hahaha. Hopefully so. I enjoyed this beautiful interchange with the subtle humor lacing it as reality prepared to become rather dangerous. Hope all goes well.