Maybe just a little bit more,
Maybe a tad bit less.
Oh now a bit more.
It goes along the lines.
A tad bit more a tad bit less.
Swirls like a cube.
Swirls of amber,
Or maybe gold;
Who knows.
Just a little bit more,
A tad bit less.
Do you want another?
Oh yes please!
The amber it tastes of Darjeeling
And the cubes of canes.
Maybe just a Tad bit more now?
Yes yes indeed, if you say so.
Ah! This is heavenly.
What a lovely cuppa
Tis turned out to be.
i find you just hide yourself behind those ahhs and repetitions. it's good for some poems, but it's not cool to use it as a style. annoys the fuck out of me.