Silvered Light.
Phosphorescent bands of silver bright
Across romantic
................. night-borne
Still and silent sea,
.......................... informing
Me that beauty such as this lies
Deep in eyes of love,
................ binding
Souls as friends for all of life.
A part of true romance is the right
Of love to take it's course,
................ yet may
We mortals never have a say
In what strange moonlight
...................lays in trust?
Within our minds
................. silver stranded lustre
Shines it's willful way
..................despite our plight.
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
oh how good. Kudos!
oh how good. Kudos!
Pendemic
Fay your eloquent words shower silvery light over your readers as they read this awesome piece.
Fay your eloquent words shower silvery light over your readers as they read this awesome piece.
Carl Harris
This is wonderfully romantic poem, Fay, beautifully illustrated with that exceptionally vivid painting which, as if by magic, reflects your lovely words quite brilliantly! Carl.
This is wonderfully romantic poem, Fay, beautifully illustrated with that exceptionally vivid painting which, as if by magic, reflects your lovely words quite brilliantly! Carl.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Silvered Light + Fay's Gold Pen= Platinum Poetry ! And what a literary equation this be ! FjR-2010
Silvered Light + Fay's Gold Pen= Platinum Poetry ! And what a literary equation this be ! FjR-2010
carol
binding souls of friends lovely thoughts
binding souls of friends lovely thoughts
Sandra Martyres
A delighful Moonlight piece....the silver stranded lustre is such a delicate and beautifully descriptive phrase....
A delighful Moonlight piece....the silver stranded lustre is such a delicate and beautifully descriptive phrase....
Ency Bearis
A unique poem...very impressive.
A unique poem...very impressive.
heterodynemind
Your originality never fails to amaze. "In what strange moonlight lays in trust" such a mesmerizing line.
Your originality never fails to amaze. "In what strange moonlight lays in trust" such a mesmerizing line.
Stunning silver in painting and in poetry. So many glorious images and the first line sets the poem alight. It has set my mind alight so very beautifully.