Twelfth Haiku
Inspired by K R Brandli's terrific Haiku "the Pretty Moon"
A silver lining
in midnight's ancient slumber
glistens on water
robyn selters
exquisite... has me holding my breath in wonder... superb
exquisite... has me holding my breath in wonder... superb
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So beautiful are these words! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
So beautiful are these words! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Jenny Gordon
The indulgence of reading your superb reflections is the amazing cleverness that forever dances forth to tantalize. La, if I could only write haikus like you. Awesome, impressive, fantastic, marvelous. What imagery so richly laden with layers. I am nigh floored. Wonderful.
The indulgence of reading your superb reflections is the amazing cleverness that forever dances forth to tantalize. La, if I could only write haikus like you. Awesome, impressive, fantastic, marvelous. What imagery so richly laden with layers. I am nigh floored. Wonderful.
Chaos1214
To my mind, this piece provides plenty of inspiration of its own.
To my mind, this piece provides plenty of inspiration of its own.
Nightowl
I can just about picture the moon reflecting off the water, gracing the night with an almost serene glow. Quite a write.
I can just about picture the moon reflecting off the water, gracing the night with an almost serene glow. Quite a write.
heather wilkins
Nice image of the silver moon Patrick.
Nice image of the silver moon Patrick.
Ken e Hall
Moons midnight wonder penned ...Regards
Moons midnight wonder penned ...Regards
Pranab k chakraborty
"ancient" is the word which makes the writing different from picturising the momentary image. The word extends the span of intelligence where imagery lost its hypnotic charm. Another essence of philosophy inclines.
"ancient" is the word which makes the writing different from picturising the momentary image. The word extends the span of intelligence where imagery lost its hypnotic charm. Another essence of philosophy inclines.
Debs
Woooow sipmple and lovely I can picture that scene.
Woooow sipmple and lovely I can picture that scene.
Raj Arumugam
simple, lovely and radiant lines, Patrick
simple, lovely and radiant lines, Patrick
Sandra Martyres
A wonderful haiku...tfs Patrick
A wonderful haiku...tfs Patrick
patspoems
A beautiful picture painted in these three lovely lines..... Pat
A beautiful picture painted in these three lovely lines..... Pat
Thank you for the dedication, Patrick. Wonderfully evocative haiku.