Happy Valentine Day
A summer dream sloshes around
in the wide eyes of time,
we call it a present.
I smile -
holding a brush in my hand.
My heart being
the colorful pallete.
Dream filled pockets
lend
a sense of being to me
in a celebration called
Us...
I pluck the rainbow
from the blue cheeks
and fill the wind's eyes
with OUR song ...
Karin Anderson
Nature is brilliantly woven into your imagery and the first stanza is a fine example and grabs the reader's attention instantly. Color and sound play a romantic part and the last stanza is an absolute triumph and I totally adore it!
Nature is brilliantly woven into your imagery and the first stanza is a fine example and grabs the reader's attention instantly. Color and sound play a romantic part and the last stanza is an absolute triumph and I totally adore it!
Sylvia Frances Chan
A Happy Valentine Day is well captured in this so lovely poem! Excellent write!
A Happy Valentine Day is well captured in this so lovely poem! Excellent write!
Meggie Gultiano
very lovely and romantic piece!!
very lovely and romantic piece!!
narain, jay p.
This is definitely one of the best poems.
This is definitely one of the best poems.
Susan Jarvis
A rainbow's song of romance that captures the essence of Valentine's Day - just lovely.
A rainbow's song of romance that captures the essence of Valentine's Day - just lovely.
T A Ramesh
picture of romantic situation is well depicted by your brush!
picture of romantic situation is well depicted by your brush!
seema chowdhury
Beautiful and pure.
Beautiful and pure.
Fay Slimm
Full of romantic imagery this will sate the intended's heart real well dear Niks - - a tender Valentine message.
Full of romantic imagery this will sate the intended's heart real well dear Niks - - a tender Valentine message.
Sandra Martyres
a beautiful poem for Valentine's Day..The last verse is exquisite Nikunj.
a beautiful poem for Valentine's Day..The last verse is exquisite Nikunj.
Lynda Robson
A lovely write for Valentine's day. beautiful :)
A lovely write for Valentine's day. beautiful :)
Wow. Breathtaking, awesome, impressive love song for the romantic holiday! Superb! Fantastic, irresistibly laden with ardent affection and romance, tender love and ecstasy. How lovely, brilliant, magnificent. What a treasure for her to savour, especially yourself. Too beautiful. I love it.