She Loathes Me...
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"Life is a game, boy. Life is a game that one plays
according to the rules." -J. D. Salinger
(The Catcher in the Rye, spoken by Mr. Spencer)
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She loathes me, absolutely,
And without remorse.
She detests me. In a most
Awful way, of course.
She does not hate me all at once.
She lets it boil and fume,
Until the stench and venom
From her hatred fills the room.
She takes her precious time,
And ponders every hate she feels.
An ability for which she has
Abundant talent, dreadful skills.
Just mention me and watch her tense,
Her fury seething, her wrath immense.
Her eyes like thin, sharpened shards of slate.
Black as death and full of hate.
Wild as a troubled wind,
Cutting down what lies within
Her grasp, with talons sharp as night,
She slashes everything in sight.
She loathes me with a perfect hate.
A bitter herb she cannot negate.
And waits, with the hope my blood shall spill,
And she will finally have her kill.
Copyright © 2010 Richard D. Remler
Bit of a RePost
Wow I like your sentence`` She loathes me with a perfect hate. `` correctful she had right to do so for you may have done wicked. well it is very interesting poem to read ,really enjoyed each bit of it . wonderful !
Is this a tale of a mouse fearing his end at the hands/claws of that hateful she cat? Great observation... You portrayed the scene and the emotions so very well. Commending you for this lovely work, very well written.
I agree with Raj: dreadful, still wonderful poem! Great write!
ironically an enjoyable read - even though she hates you! - that's just to say how well the poem is written!
I guess she loathes you!! A deep and dark write but an enjoyable read................Jerry (*_*)
Good write Richard, i can sense the loathing from here lol
Such hate? well written.
enjoyed very much
I shall send you a message with the perfect answer to all of this negativity my friend. Your friend in words, Pete
Sounds like a standard marriage then? . Seriously.... this was right up my street. Enjoyed the flow, the delivery and more importantly the graphic and witty content.
A clearsighted reflection of a brutally honest insight. Very strong piece!