Haiku The Swans...A Chain
Dapper swans glide while
blue waters steal brightly hued
tributes to spring time
harmonies of spring
swans, blue waters, pink blooms
of dogwood trees wave
Dorothy alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Lynda Robson
Lovely imagery in this delightful write Dorothy
Lovely imagery in this delightful write Dorothy
carol
whatever time of year - just beautiful dorothy
whatever time of year - just beautiful dorothy
Kesav V Easwaran
Two nice independant haikus on spring built on swan imageries...there is no 'chain' or 'series' in haiku poems- they always stand on their three legs only...you know better than me, Dorothy!
Two nice independant haikus on spring built on swan imageries...there is no 'chain' or 'series' in haiku poems- they always stand on their three legs only...you know better than me, Dorothy!
marvinbrato
A beauty in springtime!
A beauty in springtime!
Sylvia Frances Chan
tributes to spring time, Dorothy, here it is still MINUS TEN C. and at my youngest son's place: minus THIRTEEN Celcius....since a couple of days...almost a week from today... Beautiful Haiku about Springtime, dear!
tributes to spring time, Dorothy, here it is still MINUS TEN C. and at my youngest son's place: minus THIRTEEN Celcius....since a couple of days...almost a week from today... Beautiful Haiku about Springtime, dear!
leafsailor
it settles in, read it twice and it shimmers ,still i learn
it settles in, read it twice and it shimmers ,still i learn
You have interwoven some spectacular images here Dorothy and the colors and harmony swirl beautifully together.