Are You?
A VALENTINE CONVERSATION.
For an unending love, heart are you
big enough ?
Have you the largesse needed like the essence
in star-stuff or that seen in fire ?
Do you feel deep desire ?
Have you the fervour or even the nerve to fight
for a lover
when you discover he seems not to care ?
Will your love end there ?
Or will you dig out the cause and get to solutions
by reaching the root ?
What is it that keeps us apart from each other's
true feelings oh heart ?
Are you, heart, prepared with his impotent ideas
to cope and in hopes to share ?
If so, be big-hearted and today make a start.
John X. McCullagh
A nice sort of valentine
A nice sort of valentine
Shakespeares Waste Bin
This is such a lovely read Fay, just right for this time of year
This is such a lovely read Fay, just right for this time of year
T A Ramesh
Many questions at last ending in one resolute answer is fine to read!
Many questions at last ending in one resolute answer is fine to read!
nimal dunuhinga
A deep big heart!
A deep big heart!
Lynda Robson
Better to have loved and lost, go for it I say, great write Fay
Better to have loved and lost, go for it I say, great write Fay
Gerard Lebel
Is a loving heart ever prepared to embrace the trials and tribulations of life??........a wonderful read......Jerry (*_*)
Is a loving heart ever prepared to embrace the trials and tribulations of life??........a wonderful read......Jerry (*_*)
Karin Anderson
Important questioning throughout this inspiring piece as it gets to the depth of love and life. Wonderful writing Fay~
Important questioning throughout this inspiring piece as it gets to the depth of love and life. Wonderful writing Fay~
Meggie Gultiano
better to start, than never at all.This is wonderful, Fay!!
better to start, than never at all.This is wonderful, Fay!!
kath
The poet's mind questioning the heart is inspired Fay and leads to a wonderful unveiling of love's great wisdoms! Love it! :) kath xxx
The poet's mind questioning the heart is inspired Fay and leads to a wonderful unveiling of love's great wisdoms! Love it! :) kath xxx
Debs
Excellent as always Fay.These lines are great....Are you, heart, prepared with his troubled life to cope and in his hopes to share ? If so, be big-hearted, today make a start
Excellent as always Fay.These lines are great....Are you, heart, prepared with his troubled life to cope and in his hopes to share ? If so, be big-hearted, today make a start
magnolia
A well written piece on what it takes to love.I like the way you question the heart, great poem Fay...Maggie
A well written piece on what it takes to love.I like the way you question the heart, great poem Fay...Maggie
carol
not so easy to make a start but its in the trying
not so easy to make a start but its in the trying
Sandra Martyres
Fasy you capture the essence of a relationship in this poem written with great depth of feeling...
Fasy you capture the essence of a relationship in this poem written with great depth of feeling...
Raj Arumugam
the depth of love demands a heart of great strength and resourcefulness...true indeed, Fay...a truth about love and life very well captured...
the depth of love demands a heart of great strength and resourcefulness...true indeed, Fay...a truth about love and life very well captured...
A great message to your heart. I hope it is listening Fay.... Pat