How can I surpass my work this Day : A Villanelle:
Subject: How can I surpass my work { A Villanelle }
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How can I surpass my work this day. ?
To win praise from the love of my life.
One way she would tell me "Don't try."
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You surpass yourself daily no lie.
To try at all the stress may cause strife.
How can I surpass my work this day. ?
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It's no wonder you cannot give way.
A Villanelle sharper than a knife.
One way she would tell me "Don't try "
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Well!How I love thee what more can I say
Could I write now so true to my life?
How can I surpass my work this day. ?
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Let me not be a pest , get in the way
If I run short of words will it be tripe?
One way she would tell me "Don't try "
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I shall try another poet style gay ?
No best stay the way I am, in spite
How can I surpass my work this day. ?
One way she would tell me "Don't try "
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Posted by Philip
February 4th 2012
Nice one read! You have done well!
Good advice Pete...I shall try that !
When we reach outside ourselves for the approval of our words we often set ourselves up for disappointment. Write what you feel and feel that what you write fulfills a need some way. Your friend in words, Pete
You are who you are are Philip. If you wrote in another style, I would wonder if it was really you..lol. :)