Costless.
Paradise
which, never
lost, sits
patiently silent
and waits.
Costless, this
mysterious
yet regained
state of
Edenic bliss,
which
takes but one
split
minute when
glimpsed,
to open gold
doors
and allow us
a taste.
Raj Arumugam
a delightful moment of insight into the state of bliss, Fay...
a delightful moment of insight into the state of bliss, Fay...
Shakespeares Waste Bin
Such a lovely read Fay top draw write
Such a lovely read Fay top draw write
Jenny Gordon
Oooh,la,la,la! What a wonderfully enticing lure to that wondrous state of "paradise"! How beautifully mere words poignantly yet subtly rouse that sentiment inexplicably. Awesome, impressive, superb! Wow. I think it even made me hold my breath momentarily.
Oooh,la,la,la! What a wonderfully enticing lure to that wondrous state of "paradise"! How beautifully mere words poignantly yet subtly rouse that sentiment inexplicably. Awesome, impressive, superb! Wow. I think it even made me hold my breath momentarily.
magnolia
Paradise !..depends which road we take to get there. A deep write Fay and made me think ! thanks...Maggie
Paradise !..depends which road we take to get there. A deep write Fay and made me think ! thanks...Maggie
carol
paradise fay holds the key
paradise fay holds the key
T A Ramesh
Paradise is within our reach; but we searching for it in a round about way!
Paradise is within our reach; but we searching for it in a round about way!
Kesav V Easwaran
A most comforting write to read, Fay
A most comforting write to read, Fay
samanyan
very true fay it's all here...we fail to take time and give it a glance
very true fay it's all here...we fail to take time and give it a glance
Karin Anderson
An intriguing look at paradise and this priceless state of being is what most people eventually hope to enter. Perhaps in meditation it can be glimpsed but we need to earn the right to enter it through love and caring for others and our planet earth. Thank you Fay for helping me put my thinking cap on~
An intriguing look at paradise and this priceless state of being is what most people eventually hope to enter. Perhaps in meditation it can be glimpsed but we need to earn the right to enter it through love and caring for others and our planet earth. Thank you Fay for helping me put my thinking cap on~
Shashendra Amalshan
Having said that when we do feel crappy and things are not quite going our away, we just don’t feel like opening ourselves to the beauties that lay in paradise, Beautiful poetry though Fay.
Having said that when we do feel crappy and things are not quite going our away, we just don’t feel like opening ourselves to the beauties that lay in paradise, Beautiful poetry though Fay.
RAJ NANDY
True Fay ! I have yet to go through Milton's Epic , swimming with Shakespeare now ! Thanks for sharing , -Raj
True Fay ! I have yet to go through Milton's Epic , swimming with Shakespeare now ! Thanks for sharing , -Raj
C. P. Sharma
Paradise is never lost but our measure of time is so small that it takes years and years and sometimes several births to break down the doors. Your poetry of the soul goes deep, Fay.
Paradise is never lost but our measure of time is so small that it takes years and years and sometimes several births to break down the doors. Your poetry of the soul goes deep, Fay.
SaneJustBarely
They often say that we are resposible for making out own happiness...perhaps this is true. When we try to make someone else's happiness is when we find we haven't a clue. Your friend in words, Pete
They often say that we are resposible for making out own happiness...perhaps this is true. When we try to make someone else's happiness is when we find we haven't a clue. Your friend in words, Pete
Ata
your words are so soft and as Yacov noticed so elegant ,I really enjoyed to read ,tfs
your words are so soft and as Yacov noticed so elegant ,I really enjoyed to read ,tfs
Yacov Mitchenko
This is a delicate and elegant poem about a theme I myself have explored at length. I appreciate the sparse, economic, direct, and simple language. You isolate the words nicely too. As I was reading the first few lines, I automatically thought of Frost's lines: "We dance around in a ring and suppose/But the secret sits in the middle and knows." I enjoyed this, Fay.
This is a delicate and elegant poem about a theme I myself have explored at length. I appreciate the sparse, economic, direct, and simple language. You isolate the words nicely too. As I was reading the first few lines, I automatically thought of Frost's lines: "We dance around in a ring and suppose/But the secret sits in the middle and knows." I enjoyed this, Fay.
Luvli poem thou speak of my home and surely your own...regards