Just Love -( ** For Meggie's Love Challange)
My love knows
How to sow metaphors
in the ink of challenge.
Just read between the lines
to find the Shadow of your whispers
on the epiphany's heart.
My love became
OURS
when silence held
the bridge between
our lips.
For it was not into my ear you whispered,
but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed,
but my soul.
And NOW the poets know
the echoes that carry
our footsteps
to the sands in Venus.
Meggie Gultiano
sorry for the typo error, Niks.It should read, I love how..
sorry for the typo error, Niks.It should read, I love how..
Meggie Gultiano
"to the sands in Venus" this is an outstanding line!!wow, I how you pull romantic words in your piece.Thanks, Nicks, for this entry!!love
"to the sands in Venus" this is an outstanding line!!wow, I how you pull romantic words in your piece.Thanks, Nicks, for this entry!!love
Karin Anderson
Romance is in the air and you have written a beautiful poem for the challenge. And NOW I know all about your echoing footsteps in the sands of the Venus, the planet of love. Good luck Nicks!
Romance is in the air and you have written a beautiful poem for the challenge. And NOW I know all about your echoing footsteps in the sands of the Venus, the planet of love. Good luck Nicks!
sridevi
Beautiful Niks .just lovely and how I love the sands in Venus :)
Beautiful Niks .just lovely and how I love the sands in Venus :)
Jenny Gordon
Impressive. Fantastic how beautifully this wove the specified prompt beautifully into your peculiar style. Awesome imagery and excellent metaphors, fascinating. Me likes.
Impressive. Fantastic how beautifully this wove the specified prompt beautifully into your peculiar style. Awesome imagery and excellent metaphors, fascinating. Me likes.
narain, jay p.
great write. A sure winner.
great write. A sure winner.
heather wilkins
great poem. beautifully written. good luck.
great poem. beautifully written. good luck.
Fay Slimm
Ah - - so glad you succumbed to the challenge dear Niks - - you make the meaning of love so very romantic. A worthy entry indeed.
Ah - - so glad you succumbed to the challenge dear Niks - - you make the meaning of love so very romantic. A worthy entry indeed.
SaneJustBarely
There's a true feeling of warmth in your words. Your friend in words, Pete
There's a true feeling of warmth in your words. Your friend in words, Pete
Lynda Robson
So lovely Niks, good luck
So lovely Niks, good luck
T A Ramesh
Nice one to read!
Nice one to read!
Susan Jarvis
A well crafted poem woven with golden threads of romance - a strong contender indeed.
A well crafted poem woven with golden threads of romance - a strong contender indeed.
magnolia
Good luck with this beauty, a wonderful write !..Maggie
Good luck with this beauty, a wonderful write !..Maggie
Ency Bearis
Lovely poem Nikunj ...best of luck for the challenge.
Lovely poem Nikunj ...best of luck for the challenge.
Nikunj
Thanks sandra ..the challenge broke the pause I was sucked in...
Thanks sandra ..the challenge broke the pause I was sucked in...
Sandra Martyres
Bravo Nikunj....good luck with the competition...nice poem
Bravo Nikunj....good luck with the competition...nice poem
What a beautiful yet strong poem on Love. So firmly said: And NOW the poets know the echoes that carry our footsteps to the sands in Venus, and yet very tender and full of romance...I wish you much success with Meggie's Love Challenge, and the very best!