Darkness
Darkness is slowly disappearing
Sun from behind hills appearing
May soon bring shine of happiness
Everybody may delight and show it on the face
jadia4708au
Re: Darkness by starstruck13 on Thursday, February 02, 2012 (10:34:28) a good poem i enjoyed reading this one
Re: Darkness by starstruck13 on Thursday, February 02, 2012 (10:34:28) a good poem i enjoyed reading this one
jadia4708au
Maisie 2012.02.02 10:16 Love the quiet optimism in this one, it's brevity gives it impact. Reply
Maisie 2012.02.02 10:16 Love the quiet optimism in this one, it's brevity gives it impact. Reply
jadia4708au
Date & Time: 2/1/2012 9:22:00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 29703099 - Darkness Member: Cilia Rose Comment: Short and Sweet, Husmukh
Date & Time: 2/1/2012 9:22:00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 29703099 - Darkness Member: Cilia Rose Comment: Short and Sweet, Husmukh
Re: Darkness (Score: 1 ) by Ego_Rocks2x on Thursday, February 02, 2012 (11:03:18) For four lines, this is really nice. but with a title like darkness, you may want to have it longer, or not so happy. I'm not saying it's a bad title for this poem, b/c i love how the poem contradicts the title, but I'm just saying that it's kinda misleading, you know. Nice poem by the way, I give it a 10. And I look forward to reading more poems that you post.