i cut in

first time i saw you
dancing with another woman
i did something i've never done
i cut in
and so happy, my heart sang
we swayed and moved as one
to song after song
do you believe in dreams
that come true?
that your star went swishing across the sky
at this gentle moment
we touched hands

Kesav V Easwaran
Beautifully romantic...recommend to Meggies challenge!

Eyan Desir
Carol words flowed like butter milk...great job cheers

SaneJustBarely
A Woman who sees and knows what she wants dances circle around the timid ones! Your friend in words, Pete

LightH2O
Wow! so lovely and daring, a woman after my own heart, brave and romantic at the same time.

Simply Bono Razek
bravo Carol..I can see you're not one of those " I wish I had done or said "type of person..some moments of opportunity only appear once...I like this beautiful/romantic write :)

Karin Anderson
Good on you Carol and it worked a treat. I love "your star went swishing across the sky" as it goes forever into the night~

Sandra Martyres
wow Carol...bravery and romanticism in the same piece...

Lynda Robson
Brave girl lol, how romantic

Sylvia Frances Chan
This is so very beautiful, you are really artistic my dear, no other words for you...I've been following your poems, though not always giving a comment, but you belong to the promising most talented poets here in PF!! This is poetry so sublime!!