About the beauty
I tried to write about the beauty
but failed to catch words as could find only few
She was symbol of complete universe
Melody and rhythm interwoven with verse
Anybody would loose concentration
Try to have strong bond with warm relation
She was least concerned and looked at none
I dreamt about her and tried to go close to be someone
She was murmuring with gentle voice
I could hear nothing as there was so much noise
She might be talking with small children
I thought she may address to me even
I felt chill in bottom of my heart
She represented herself as lovely piece of an art
I had no idea from where to start
So decided to leave her at this point and depart
God has given her ample opportunity
She has talent and extra ordinary quality
Even though she is to some extent dependent
She has herself to venture and create an event
She is on the ground but make us airborne
It is nice creation on earth and gives nice turn
Life as such may be felt barren if she proved defiant
We must feel happy to find her as she may prove star and reliant
In all the forms her role has remained dominant
She may not have the solutions in sight very urgently
Yet may stand by us and give inspirational guidance
That can alter the course and prove decisive at once
From object point of view she has been pained very weak
But we have kept females under domination and not allowed to speak
She was seen and meant to be life partner
We were to protect her with safety as Gardner
I left the idea of writing purely as an object
At one point of time I had tried to resist and reject
She is not the object to be defined from one angle
Its real beauty is realized only when resulted into triangle
Lisa O' Connor Wonderful, captivated until the very end, thank you for sharing. 11 hours ago via mobile · Like
John Castellenas Beauty is the decision of the eye of the beholder. Many beautiful things in our world for the people with open eyes to see. 6 hours ago · Like
isa O' Connor Wonderful, captivated until the very end, thank you for sharing. 5 minutes ago via mobile · Like
Maya Dearth amazing poetry! about a minute ago · Like
JRNightingale 2012.02.02 19:53 Good work. You can't force writing and if it is an inner urge it will release itself eventually. Reply
Posted By: cherryk - on February 2, 2012 Where there is sadness there can be joy and life goes on, my friend. Love & blessings... [ Request review ]
afatah wow, so wonderfull words.
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♬♪ ∫ครкใค را.. wow speechless
dev raj V. Nice, I like
» RAMSES_19 EL .. EXCELLENT
madwomaninthe.. you have written really beautifully well..! kudos!
madwomaninthe.. u must be an artist or painter imagining to bring life to an imagined beauty?
mrs parikh excellent
DrSweet Angel but why???????????????????// 2 minutes ago · Like
prasad bolimeru nice!
george very nice,thanks
Liz L. Prakash Beautiful,thank you,dear friend Hasmukh
Leslie Ledoux wow deep!
kirti shah I felt chill in bottom of my heart She represented herself as lovely piece of an art I had no idea from where to start
Shaista Nayaab nice one