Condemned??
A dark black halo seemed
to settle on his head.
Evil personified,
she pontificated.
He was destined to be
avoided like the snake.
Even from a distance,
she said, he brought bad luck.
This was her last attempt
at badmouthing the man,
she professed to love but,
who had not responded?
She seemed bent on proving
that having been scorned she'd
show him a thing or two
that even hell couldn't....
Raj Arumugam
a very mature and fair-minded exploration of an aspect of love, scorend love in this instance, Sandra
a very mature and fair-minded exploration of an aspect of love, scorend love in this instance, Sandra
Karin Anderson
A compelling read and only God knows what happened when she showed him a thing or two. You set the evil mood so well too!
A compelling read and only God knows what happened when she showed him a thing or two. You set the evil mood so well too!
Kesav V Easwaran
Another portrait of an Evil Male...well painted to appease female taste, Sandra
Another portrait of an Evil Male...well painted to appease female taste, Sandra
Eyan Desir
Like the fact the poem is not straight forward very deep well crafted
Like the fact the poem is not straight forward very deep well crafted
Chaos1214
Ha ha... I've always had the sneaking suspicion that the women who are attracted to "bad boys" were just eager for the chance to give 'em a liberal taste of their own medicine : D
Ha ha... I've always had the sneaking suspicion that the women who are attracted to "bad boys" were just eager for the chance to give 'em a liberal taste of their own medicine : D
LightH2O
Wow!, there's nothing like the scorn of a woman... well penned.
Wow!, there's nothing like the scorn of a woman... well penned.
Fay Slimm
I love the last unfinished line Sandra - this verse speaks of a woman scorned in such good detail and how true the phrase"evil personified" can be at such times with some. An engaging read.
I love the last unfinished line Sandra - this verse speaks of a woman scorned in such good detail and how true the phrase"evil personified" can be at such times with some. An engaging read.
carol
men dont realize whgat vengeance a woman can do
men dont realize whgat vengeance a woman can do
Lynda Robson
I agree with Bono, he had better watch out lol :)
I agree with Bono, he had better watch out lol :)
samanyan
if woman decide ...to show hell..they surely will
if woman decide ...to show hell..they surely will
Simply Bono Razek
oh Sandra they say.."Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned"
oh Sandra they say.."Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned"
James T. Adair
That wasn't love then...just someone selfish and vindictive. You love someone....you love them in parting too; if it is really love.
That wasn't love then...just someone selfish and vindictive. You love someone....you love them in parting too; if it is really love.
Aye, she had it in for him. But she's a match or worse for all that...sesame. Nothing like the Devil's sidekick in a dress and venting. So much for her supposed "love." Doubtless he did not deserve it, but the vaunted is hereby too cheap to be true. Excellent tribute to the hellish danger of daring to scorn a woman. Wonderful with apt imagery.