Without you

I wish i had died in my sleep while I was still dreaming of you...
to never wake up the other day in a world without you.
How'd I know if you're still mine..
I'm just getting old alone and the time's passing by.
My heart feel so cold without you..
to wake up every tomorrow in a world without you.

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allenpaulson
Good job.
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Eyan Desir
Move on I say...only thing man can live without Is air...good write
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heather wilkins
Loving you was the easiest thing I ever tried to do. Giving you up was the hardest thing I have ever tried to do. Even though you are gone I still can not give you up. And after time has passed I realize I never will. The world is not the same without you. sad but lovely expressions.
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James T. Adair
Living without someone we love so much is hard, though we wish them well and for their happiness. Harder still if they have passed away and all possibility seems forever gone. You pray for their soul and hope somehow you'll meet again somewhere...that's all one can do. That void always exists inside you and only love can help to fill it. Hold open the possibility that someone will love you despite another or others in your heart. I'm proof that it can happen. Be willing to accept love....to take a chance on it. Love in any form is a miracle and a precious thing. So keep your heart open ...however lonely or hurting : )
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narain, jay p.
nice but sad poem.
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Nightowl
a little repetitive, but the message is clear. The world does seem a bit darker after a loss, but we're usually pretty good at recovery. A thoughtful write. Enjoyed. tfs
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Fay Slimm
The saddest of verses this really touches the heart.
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Simply Bono Razek
I love this ! yes it may contain a bit of sadness..but still it touches me heart...love your opening line--have felt those words.....
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