allergic to life
i think I'm allergic to life
every time i live it,
i break out in a horrible rash
so might i sit here at home
and alone, i wont have to try.
but, if i find I'm allergic to myself
i bet that rash would be huge,
guess i'll buy a strong creme
and get myself out into the stream of life.
seema chowdhury
oh no! don't say that. life is a bliss of God, just walk out of this darkness and look at the bright sun, it will lighten your mind, body and soul. just try once. take care
oh no! don't say that. life is a bliss of God, just walk out of this darkness and look at the bright sun, it will lighten your mind, body and soul. just try once. take care
Eyan Desir
Life is what we make it, sometimes It is a nightmare..anyway good write
Life is what we make it, sometimes It is a nightmare..anyway good write
stevenstirk
No it's best to get out and cure the allergy. Your poems are enough to get rid of my allergies.
No it's best to get out and cure the allergy. Your poems are enough to get rid of my allergies.
narain, jay p.
Great thoughts. I like closing verses.
Great thoughts. I like closing verses.
magnolia
Some good thoughts here carol. Think we all are allergic to life sometimes, but your last line is good advice !..Maggie
Some good thoughts here carol. Think we all are allergic to life sometimes, but your last line is good advice !..Maggie
SaneJustBarely
I've known other who seemed allergic to me but I got past that self-judgement phase long ago and learned to love me for what I have to offer. Your friend in words, Pete
I've known other who seemed allergic to me but I got past that self-judgement phase long ago and learned to love me for what I have to offer. Your friend in words, Pete
Simply Bono Razek
had these symptoms before..think they're returning..am agreeing with your last two closing lines...
had these symptoms before..think they're returning..am agreeing with your last two closing lines...
patspoems
Liked the final stanza with such a positive look at life.... Pat
Liked the final stanza with such a positive look at life.... Pat
Kesav V Easwaran
Nice expressive write, Carol...presents a positive attitude towards life
Nice expressive write, Carol...presents a positive attitude towards life
Sandra Martyres
getting into the stream of life, looks like a great step forward Carol. Take care
getting into the stream of life, looks like a great step forward Carol. Take care
Lynda Robson
Think we all get this way sometimes,
Think we all get this way sometimes,
tom balch
Stream of life looks best to me, Carol. But don´t go making any rash moves lol.
Stream of life looks best to me, Carol. But don´t go making any rash moves lol.
Life is like the moon, it has a light side and a dark side, otherwise life will be as dull as we are without our imaginations, Carol! Like buy a strong creme and get yourself out into the stream of life.Nice and well worded poem, Carol.