Steps
Days slip into nights
marching swiftly to reveal
steps I never took
© Copyright 2008 Gerard Lebel
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heather wilkins
in retrospect we all see steps we should have taken. lots of though in a few words. nice one Gerard.
in retrospect we all see steps we should have taken. lots of though in a few words. nice one Gerard.
Linda Ori
Wonderfully introspective senryu, written on a topic we all understand, probably too well. Nicely done!
Wonderfully introspective senryu, written on a topic we all understand, probably too well. Nicely done!
Sandra Martyres
Beautifully worded with a nice illustration too
Beautifully worded with a nice illustration too
SaneJustBarely
Ah, but the next sunrise offer another chance to take those steps Jerry. Your friend in words, Pete
Ah, but the next sunrise offer another chance to take those steps Jerry. Your friend in words, Pete
The opportunities we may have missed expressed so well in the lovely senryu..... Pat