Be Still My Heart.
Be still my heart.
Be not disturbed, as violently
Your beats reverb passion unforeseen.
He who pledged a lifelong love
Has undervalued words, ill-said,
And now has fled, without a backward
Glance at all that might have been.
Be still. my heart.
Still you stir in angry disarray.
This lover who you thought you knew,
Who called to say his bags he'd packed
Has coldly flown away.
His love turned out untrue.
Be still my heart.
He never did nor never will
Deserve us, - - me or you.
Karin Anderson
So important to still the heart and not blame oneself for another's angry decision. The poem speaks volumes about relationships and crafted with your prudent pen. The leaf in the picture so symbolic where a piece is lost in a heart and as you say 'coldly flown away'. You are one amazing creative person Fay. love Karin
So important to still the heart and not blame oneself for another's angry decision. The poem speaks volumes about relationships and crafted with your prudent pen. The leaf in the picture so symbolic where a piece is lost in a heart and as you say 'coldly flown away'. You are one amazing creative person Fay. love Karin
Alison Cassidy
This is a real 'to be or not to be' sort of soliloquy, as the two halves of the self battle to cope with rejection and abandonment. The title is brilliant and the final triplet stands tall. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This is a real 'to be or not to be' sort of soliloquy, as the two halves of the self battle to cope with rejection and abandonment. The title is brilliant and the final triplet stands tall. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Oh Yes!...under simular circumstances I wrote "What You Gonna Do Now Girl"...(not posted)...I love the attitude of this poem...Great Poem saying, You are Strong! You Are Good! we must always remind ourselves of this after such relationships. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Oh Yes!...under simular circumstances I wrote "What You Gonna Do Now Girl"...(not posted)...I love the attitude of this poem...Great Poem saying, You are Strong! You Are Good! we must always remind ourselves of this after such relationships. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
sonetta
i've always wanted to write a poem with this line/title....now i'm not sure anymore...:)
i've always wanted to write a poem with this line/title....now i'm not sure anymore...:)
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
True Love was made to be Inexorable, not inimical. Hearts bneed to be thick with passion...Void of that burns but will heal .However,to accept a Love that wavers, is to place your Heart in a pyre, that will surely scathe in a manner that will incur indelible scars. Young lass...this i like much...You are a poetic machine these day's,and this site is better for it ! F Jr-2010
True Love was made to be Inexorable, not inimical. Hearts bneed to be thick with passion...Void of that burns but will heal .However,to accept a Love that wavers, is to place your Heart in a pyre, that will surely scathe in a manner that will incur indelible scars. Young lass...this i like much...You are a poetic machine these day's,and this site is better for it ! F Jr-2010
Pendemic
This poem has an age old feel to it, with an age old message. Well written.
This poem has an age old feel to it, with an age old message. Well written.
Sandra Martyres
A very touching piece Fay...with a perfect ending
A very touching piece Fay...with a perfect ending
This is a wonderfully expressive poem, Fay, written exceptionally well in every line. Your concluding lines say it so well in this brilliant poem! Carl.