boat of feathers
in the ocean sailed
a small boat of feathers
so light, seemed to skim'
the tops of the waves
bobbling wobbling
almost ready to fly
but could not leave,
the waves of eternity
ocean of summers forever
it could only yearn
for the blue sky above
LightH2O
What a lovely imagery, you're amazing.
What a lovely imagery, you're amazing.
Fay Slimm
Your imaginative writing gets better each time Carol -- a lovely read.
Your imaginative writing gets better each time Carol -- a lovely read.
Lynda Robson
Picturesque write Carol, lovely
Picturesque write Carol, lovely
stevenstirk
This is lovely. Your boat of white feathers fits so snugly between the sky and the sea. The feathers have the feel of straying clouds.
This is lovely. Your boat of white feathers fits so snugly between the sky and the sea. The feathers have the feel of straying clouds.
Karin Anderson
A beautiful scope of imagination Carol from the ocean for the yearning of the blue sky above~
A beautiful scope of imagination Carol from the ocean for the yearning of the blue sky above~
C. P. Sharma
Wonderful flight of fancy on boat of feathers.
Wonderful flight of fancy on boat of feathers.
Sylvia Frances Chan
Oh how beautiful lovely poem about unreachable longings... Brilliant Carol, I love this poem!
Oh how beautiful lovely poem about unreachable longings... Brilliant Carol, I love this poem!
The words just flow like the tide Carol. Beautiful.