Karmic Tango -3
This poem was posted yesterday under a new account that I created for myself as I was not able to log in . Now life has taken a full circle again that my old account is normal and the new one is defunct.... Anyways enjoy this poem
What are you looking at ?
The clipped wings
aren't mine .
The kites that fly high
belong to me .
The worn out tools
not mine !
The resilient spirit
finds a path in my veins.
I don't have a choice
besides my karma.
My metaphors
defy gravity all the time.
I am a poet ...
Karin Anderson
Yes you are a brilliant poet Niks. You know who you are and that positive karma is your destiny. I wish the world's population realized this too. A great uplifting vibe throughout the verse!
Yes you are a brilliant poet Niks. You know who you are and that positive karma is your destiny. I wish the world's population realized this too. A great uplifting vibe throughout the verse!
Lynda Robson
A great poet you are Niks, well done
A great poet you are Niks, well done
narain, jay p.
NICELY PENNED FROM A GENUINE POET.
NICELY PENNED FROM A GENUINE POET.
magnolia
Great metaphors Niks,... you are a poet !..Maggie
Great metaphors Niks,... you are a poet !..Maggie
Elena S
Beautiful written, I wouldn't listen to the tango rules I'd let self to fly , defy anything but freedom of a poet's dreams. Lovely spirit, thank you for share.
Beautiful written, I wouldn't listen to the tango rules I'd let self to fly , defy anything but freedom of a poet's dreams. Lovely spirit, thank you for share.
Fay Slimm
I enoyed this one first time around Niks and am more than liking a second read of the metaphors you use in this expressive piece . Good to see all the original poem-pages back once again.
I enoyed this one first time around Niks and am more than liking a second read of the metaphors you use in this expressive piece . Good to see all the original poem-pages back once again.
Oooh lalala! And how I enjoy it too! What a riot of a piece too cleverly and beautifully expressed, with hints of intrigue (to little me) and excellent imagery. I like it right well.