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Gone.

Things pass by
like - - -
ships in the night,
moonlight flight and crying.

Things also stay
like - - -
spoiled holidays,
running away and heartbreak.

Things will remind
like - - -
turning blind eyes,
uncovering hurt and the lies.

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LaSoaphia QuXazs
I love your pictures you show with each poem. Lovely poems too.
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Meggie Gultiano
life is like that..nice lines, Fay
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Kesav V Easwaran
Disturbing memories...a sorrow-born write...nice allegory
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robyn selters
moving poem... how very true... some things are sad... take care
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narain, jay p.
turth of life. Nice poem.
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nimal dunuhinga
Another 'Gone with the wind' yes,nothing is certain Fay!
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carol
things do come and go well said fay
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C. P. Sharma
Life, a mix-up of sweet and sour/There are thorns with the sweetest flower.
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RAJ NANDY
FAY, The facts of life conveyed in simple rhyme which reads fine ! -Raj
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
sad but true to the core...
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Gerard Lebel
Our lives are filled with things that come and go. 'Gone' but not forgotten.
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heather wilkins
great lines Fay. so true to life.
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tom balch
Gone defined perfectly, Fay, a very sad feel to this one.
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Ata
it is sad but I love it ,every line is worth to be saved ,tfs
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Sandra Martyres
A sad piece Fay - but so very true....take care - hugs - Sandra
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Debs
Every line you have written is so true!
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