richochet
rain like bullets being shot
poured down making
huge puddles of water
as the rain shot down
the thunder sounded
sharp, as a rifle being used
to hunt the flashes of
lightening that lit the sky
brighter than daylight
the air made sharp sounds
like tin folding unto itself
and the wind drove
along with the storm
Simply Bono Razek
its raining here now...I'll listen for your awesome storm of a poem :D
its raining here now...I'll listen for your awesome storm of a poem :D
narain, jay p.
Nice imagery on stormy weather.
Nice imagery on stormy weather.
Gerard Lebel
Stormy Weather... great imagery! Lovely read.
Stormy Weather... great imagery! Lovely read.
tom balch
Great use of metaphor in this stormy write, Carol.
Great use of metaphor in this stormy write, Carol.
MarVenea
Fantastic poem Carol, way to shine!!
Fantastic poem Carol, way to shine!!
Fay Slimm
Really enjoyed the feel of this piece Carol.
Really enjoyed the feel of this piece Carol.
Sandra Martyres
Great poem Carol -liked the imagery used to describe the storm
Great poem Carol -liked the imagery used to describe the storm
Debs
Rain already! Nice penning Carol.
Rain already! Nice penning Carol.
Ata
so well penned as always ,tfs
so well penned as always ,tfs
Eyan Desir
A well written piece
A well written piece
MoonLi
Nice one !
Nice one !
I see the sky making war on the Earth, below. Peppering the surface with bullets of rain, thunderous artillery and lightning strikes. At a strategic moment, the Earth will counter-attack, and attempt to poison the sky with sulphurous volcanic eruptions, and all over some eons old provocation, the poor creatures caught in the middle can ever hope to know. Great stuff, Carol : )