Mousetraps by iamos

Strong Temptations

The mousetrap stood outside the larder door,
a ferocious thing.
A mouse crept so silently across the floor,
and studied its spring.
Spying in front of him a piece of cheese,
strong temptations sing.
He sniffs the air, this smell is sent to please,
then warning bells ring.
This wooden block, this metal is a trap,
its power, a sting.
For suddenly there comes a deadly snap,
rodent ascending.

© Ernestine Northover

Published January 12, 2012 Write a comment
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Linda Ori
Loved the last line! Nice little piece, which just proves you can write about anything and make it sing (....or snap)! Well done, Ernestine!
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heather wilkins
I'm glad he jumped in the trap. I don't like them. ha ha enjoyed your write.
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Sandra Martyres
A rare subject for a poem, but so imaginatively written
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