i miss you

i miss you my love,
but in the moon i see
your big smile. always happy
the stars twinkle as your eyes did,
and the sun, oh the sun
reminds me of how warm you were
on those very cool nights.
and quiet mornings,
just you and i sitting outside
holding hands, and happy just to be.

Published January 11, 2012

patspoems
Absolutely beautiful Carol. Nobody can take away love and lovely memories. God Bless... Pat

windowguy
Exquisitely romantic!

Sylvia Frances Chan
dear Carol, my siister-in-law died recently(of cancer), so I am here a bit late I think. This poem brings me to ease again, a true love poem, Carol! And such beautiful metaphors, touched my heart!! Sweet words in all the lines you're building up to a brilliant poem, a jewel, Carol...Love this excellent write of you, Carol!

Kesav V Easwaran
Happiness has a wonderful face in its proximity...nice write...nice use of analogy

Eyan Desir
Very nice

Shakespeares Waste Bin
Carol SUPERB !!!!

Ralph L. Jones Jr.
Evokes the best memories people can have.

Simply Bono Razek
you've penned some so wonderful writes in the past -Carol ..but I don't think as of yet that I've read one to top this gem...its tender/romantic & so so beautiful :)

treelight
a lovely verse my friend!