let me walk your dreams with you

i keep awake
when you sleeep
just loving your
crumpled pout
the gentle purr
of your breath
the shadow of your
lashes lush
i keep awake
honey to hug you
tight
till
i blend in your mind
in spirit
to tip toe in to your
dreams
and walk your dreams
hand in hand
with you

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Nikunj
To walk the dreams togethern, to kiss the wind's while flying on the love laced clouds. To celebrate with heart what is there in mind and soul is a true bliss . Nirvana delivered on a breakfast table ... Wow my word .
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mamta agarwal
you have captured in poem, emotions which are beyond expression, can just be felt and sensed by the beloved, in sync
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nimal dunuhinga
The fragrance of romance evaporates stealthily! And many thanks indeed for your valuable comments.
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shanmugam
a very youthful poem. striking the passion
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Andrew Blakemore
A beautiful and deeply romantic piece, very touching words.
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Karin Anderson
Such touching sentiment in this beautiful poem rema. To tip toe in dreams is so special and romantic~
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Fay Slimm
Rema this is a beautiful assurance of care - tender words show such a warmth of heart. An engaging read.
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