Not tonight...
Not tonight;
Got
An early morning flight!
Its midnight,
You climbed
Up the vine,
Is it cold outside?
I can’t invite
You inside!
Gaze from the skies,
An enigmatic smile!
Wait; a call from airline-
Snap, in flight staff strike
We profusely apologise!
Here you are
Eyes over brimming,
With golden light!
Have I ever confided,
Half or full, forever bright!
O Moon, so subtle, you invite
Me to feel alive
And believe, take life’s tides
In my stride!
T A Ramesh
Nice diversion to manage some situation in life!
Nice diversion to manage some situation in life!
Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful imagination, Mamta
Beautiful imagination, Mamta
anupam
Beautiful ....
Beautiful ....
RAJ NANDY
The celestial moon is forever stable and enduring - as compared all our earthly 'flights' , and inspires us to take the ebb and flow of life in our strides ! Hope my interpretation was right ! -Raj
The celestial moon is forever stable and enduring - as compared all our earthly 'flights' , and inspires us to take the ebb and flow of life in our strides ! Hope my interpretation was right ! -Raj
PrEmJi PrEmJi
gentle touch of the moon!
gentle touch of the moon!
LightH2O
A very original and lovely write.
A very original and lovely write.
Yacov Mitchenko
This is a subtle, understated, delicate poem. The cancelled flight has given you the opportunity to come back to yourself, which is richer than far away lands. Regardless of where you go, there you are. The moon is at once just the moon, and is also a form of acute awareness. Good job.
This is a subtle, understated, delicate poem. The cancelled flight has given you the opportunity to come back to yourself, which is richer than far away lands. Regardless of where you go, there you are. The moon is at once just the moon, and is also a form of acute awareness. Good job.
Botan
This poem is beautiful, thank you.
This poem is beautiful, thank you.
MoonLi
Very nicely done .. I love the last stanza, the respite, optimism :-)
Very nicely done .. I love the last stanza, the respite, optimism :-)
Sandra Martyres
An imaginative piece Mamta.. a cancelled flight and finding solace in the moonlight
An imaginative piece Mamta.. a cancelled flight and finding solace in the moonlight
a lovely write....