~~ voice of summer ~~ (10 word poem contest)

Patrick McFarland
Has the feeling of a haiku. There's definitely an eastern vibe here. very strong piece Robyn.

sensebreeze
The cycle of nature to contrast the seasons to bring joy is captured here. Lovely...

seema chowdhury
i like your economy of words, well described.

Sana Rose
Sizzling imagery in just 10 words, Robyn.. :) Nice one..

rbvaranasi
Simple, truthful to reality! Very good word-picture.

Elena S
I was so impressed with the picture that I could not focus on words. I had to read over and over to comprehend because a storm was inside my soul happy with marvelous beauty, thank you!

Bob Blackwell
Your ten words do describe summer, we are experiencing the fierce summer storms now. The heat as well. A good ten word poem

Janvi
Nice one,

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ten words of deep thought...Sparkling! Dorothy Singing Still

patspoems
Great imagery within these ten words. Loved the picture too... Good luck.... Pat

Debs
Wow one super write on the on coming of summer and teh pciture says it all.

Dream Weaver
those storms that bring relief also bring much inspiration to us poets, this is gorgeous Robyn!

Jenny Gordon
Summer in a 10-word nutshell! La, but the conclusion reminds me of those welcome rainstorms in July (here). Thanks for a taste of an Australian summer, I never knew. Ugh. Excellent entry with poignant imagery.

MoonLi
Wonderful voice... bursting!

heather wilkins
great summer poem. good luck Robyn.

Sandra Martyres
A wonderful and accurate take on summer in just 10 word. I do not envy the task of Spysgrandson - having to judge this competition!

narain, jay p.
nice one. Hope you win the contest.

Karin Anderson
It is certainly typical of an Australian Summer Robyn. I love that we share the same country. A great entry for the competition and good luck!

Fay Slimm
This reads like the true voice of summer Robyn. - Brilliant ten-worder. - - All the best for the contest.

Lynda Robson
nice ten word poem, good luck