lagoon

softly


how
softly
raindrops
fall
upon a hidden coast
left in a daze

as mountain signs
derived from a forest scripture
are carved on the sea surface.


and even from far,
far away
in armour
of misty galaxies and alien springs
the beam reappears.

in planetrides
it sings,
along dim stars
it waltzes,

serenades, a silenced lullaby.


winter invades
yet the mantle of april
embraces a shore,



the only one
where i could ever breathe.















yelena.

robyn selters
Wow! This is a superbly flowing, evocative read... transporting and satisfying with fascinating imagery... beautiful

LightH2O
Yelena, this is a beautiful write.

Kesav V Easwaran
Nice verbal imageries in this write, Yelena

 

Frank Lambert
I love the way your raindrops fall here. Yes, I love this verse very much.

MoonLi
Superb imagery to hold my breath till the end ! Nice!!

carol
yelena one of your best recommened

Susan Jarvis
Imagery that every poet aspires to - 'forest scripture' is a touch of artistic mastery that has inspired my imagination. A real privilege to read. :)