Karmic Tango - 1

A gardener’s dream smiles
in a florist’s basket , as a seed
finds its way to the fertile sands
in ethereal cosmic love .

Blossoming buds pearled
on spring’s thread ;enchant
the senses - A soft game
played on the edge of time .

Purified spirits entwine
in a melodious rhapsody
as eternity listens to the song
that sighs have composed.

Held in balance- the quanta
lend a platonic sheen to the path;
where nirvana awaits pilgrims
at each milestone.

Jenny Gordon
Wowers. Awesome, rich, layered, breathtaking. Impressive and too lovely. Excellent imagery and thought-provoking message. Superb. I love it.

Munia Khan
A finest work from the King of Metaphor.I love it.Specially the first 2 stanzas.Great work Nikunj.

heather wilkins
your metaphors are excellent. great poem.

rema renjini nair
this poem makes mine soul smile entranced , niks

Ralph L. Jones Jr.
Impressive imagery. The transformation of the lucky seed all the way to the pilgrims who attain nirvana at each milestone.

nimal dunuhinga
'Purified spirits entwine in a melodious rhapsody' Well balanced Karma!

Ency Bearis
Brilliant write, a remarkable concept pleasure to read.

Karin Anderson
I wonder if this is a new series as it could be fascinating laced with beauty and love. Your crafting is a pleasure to behold Niks and the gardener's entrance is a wonderful lead in to spiritual enlightenment. Your imagery as usual, is exceptional!

Sandra Martyres
Your karmic song is very well crafted...with the expert use of the metaphor which you do so easily and deftly

Meggie Gultiano
I love everything here

Fay Slimm
The enchantment of spirits entwining is just one of the sensational metaphors used in this Karmic song - - a wonder of brilliant wordsmithing again Niks. Recommended

Lynda Robson
Great write Nik, your words dance on the page