When flowers demur...- Senryu
Sun fogged out whole day-
Bold yellow chrysanthemums
Mock; instant mood lift!
RAJ NANDY
Spelling correction read , -'vagaries of weather ' -Raj
Spelling correction read , -'vagaries of weather ' -Raj
RAJ NANDY
Very true ! Nature has its way of asserting itself despite the vararies of weather ! Here she does it through the chrysthemums ! -Raj
Very true ! Nature has its way of asserting itself despite the vararies of weather ! Here she does it through the chrysthemums ! -Raj
RAJ NANDY
Very true ! Nature has its way of asserting itself despite the vararies of weather ! Here she does it through the chrysthemums ! -Raj
Very true ! Nature has its way of asserting itself despite the vararies of weather ! Here she does it through the chrysthemums ! -Raj
Jenny Gordon
Awesome! What a beautiful senryu. I love this! The imagery is so perfect, the mood and romance conveyed delightfully. How lovely!
Awesome! What a beautiful senryu. I love this! The imagery is so perfect, the mood and romance conveyed delightfully. How lovely!
tom balch
A lovely Senryu, mamta.
A lovely Senryu, mamta.
nimal dunuhinga
I like Chrysanthemums!
I like Chrysanthemums!
Ralph L. Jones Jr.
Defiance is the secret to life, in this case yellow flowers defying a dreary day.
Defiance is the secret to life, in this case yellow flowers defying a dreary day.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah...lovely, flower and verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Ah...lovely, flower and verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Sandra Martyres
Just lovely Mamta - I liked the instant mood lift....
Just lovely Mamta - I liked the instant mood lift....
Lovely Senryu, romance outshines against all odds.