Daily Love Dose -31
I thought this would be the last poem in this series. Well it may be the case but the metaphor of love shall stay and the epiphany shall live forever ...amen...
DLD 31
Blue waves
gleefully kiss
the pebbled shores
in a dream filled life .
No sooner one sinks;
another one rises
from destiny's thread
held in time's firm hands.
Eternity exists
as crests and troughs
trance through
a sign wave
that smiles
while it lasts.
Moments hold
while days and nights
are hued with the colors
of joys and sorrows.
Love's strings stay
in a spirited puppet show
where curtains never fall.....
Ron Peat
Great metaphors in this one Niks. You can cut the word "then" within the first stanza/ its not needed. I love the noun "trance' used as a verb. Nice thought there. Of course creation's song is endless, the sound wave is eternal. Outer space hums with it as well. As long as it lasts is all of creation. One big smile to behold. This is that personal choice in attitude when we are able to find it. Be joyous and thankful. Hue and color mean the same thing. A redundancy there. chose one and fly with it. are hued /or are colored in joys and sorrows. Your closing metaphor wraps it all up nicely with the suggestion of lovers entangle within the depths of the divine comedy. Eternally tied with strings to every speck of creation. Nice writing. A poet friend..RH Peat
Great metaphors in this one Niks. You can cut the word "then" within the first stanza/ its not needed. I love the noun "trance' used as a verb. Nice thought there. Of course creation's song is endless, the sound wave is eternal. Outer space hums with it as well. As long as it lasts is all of creation. One big smile to behold. This is that personal choice in attitude when we are able to find it. Be joyous and thankful. Hue and color mean the same thing. A redundancy there. chose one and fly with it. are hued /or are colored in joys and sorrows. Your closing metaphor wraps it all up nicely with the suggestion of lovers entangle within the depths of the divine comedy. Eternally tied with strings to every speck of creation. Nice writing. A poet friend..RH Peat
narain, jay p.
Great muse on love. Love is eternal truth. Happy New Year!
Great muse on love. Love is eternal truth. Happy New Year!
Karin Anderson
It would be wonderful if you could print these in a book with illustrations to keep the love moments intact to draw on when needed. The imagery of the spirited puppet show where curtains never fall is a conclusion that leaves itself open for more fine poetry my talented friend~
It would be wonderful if you could print these in a book with illustrations to keep the love moments intact to draw on when needed. The imagery of the spirited puppet show where curtains never fall is a conclusion that leaves itself open for more fine poetry my talented friend~
Sandra Martyres
Love's strings stay in a spirited puppet show where curtains never fall....." The great end to a wonderful series....The wondrous feeling of love beautifully captured throughout...with the expert use of the metaphor and great imagery.
Love's strings stay in a spirited puppet show where curtains never fall....." The great end to a wonderful series....The wondrous feeling of love beautifully captured throughout...with the expert use of the metaphor and great imagery.
Fay Slimm
Last in the series this one maybe but love lasts forever and romance is entwined in your blood my friend - so here's hoping we have more from your gilded pen as next year lends itself to poetic talent like yours. Thanks for the doses already posted Niks.
Last in the series this one maybe but love lasts forever and romance is entwined in your blood my friend - so here's hoping we have more from your gilded pen as next year lends itself to poetic talent like yours. Thanks for the doses already posted Niks.
Shihab
Last three lines are prolific.a kiss on ur poetic cheek indeed.
Last three lines are prolific.a kiss on ur poetic cheek indeed.
Susan Jarvis
Enduring and eternal love captured wonderfully here.
Enduring and eternal love captured wonderfully here.
Excellent poems ....... with touch of love and its images. A lovers' pact the most likely to last forever and the daily dose will become real and never ending as mention that `` where curtains never falls``. ...... superb .