S/Haiku... HONEYMOON FAILURE

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Bankrupts don’t marry


Honeymoon would be one failure


On top of another

Published December 28, 2011 Write a comment
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Karin Anderson
Methinks this is really clever too with your play on words and wit!
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Simply Bono Razek
a brilliant one !
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Kesav V Easwaran
Witty senryu...clever write, Ken..liked
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Ralph L. Jones Jr.
Never stopped most who just live on love.
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nimal dunuhinga
Smart..........Ken always tells the truth!
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Ency Bearis
nice clever haiku
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RAJ NANDY
Ken you are right ! It would only be the moon without any honey ! -Raj
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Fay Slimm
Ha ha - - a clever one Ken.
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Love on a budget screams! Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Cat
True, but then most the time love don't mind where to honeymoon!Cat
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mamta agarwal
great advice, all those who believe in love, beware!good one Ken
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
intelligent!
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Shakespeares Waste Bin
About right I say Ken
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James T. Adair
probably right about that one
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