The Whimsical Elven Hood
Her Elven hood,
woven from
Eagle feathers
and fluffy pelts,
tinted with Mermaid fins
and Griffon tins,
coloured with pixie
violets and giraffe mane,
her fluffy hood
dancing and swaying
to the breeze,
covering her curls,
fabrics swaying
to the breeze,
as stallion’s curls,
wrapping me
in rapturous tunes…
Cuddly Deers
boozing among
fabric waves,
lunatic polar bears
shaking their bellies
and singing pop beats,
pedantic porcupines
in sober mode
refusing wine,
singing and whining
classical beats.
The deserts lightened,
as he stays ruptured, bones cracked,
throats slit,
broken and busted
covered in gloom--
she wearing a mystical
hood, lighting
the world and creating
a whimsical world
filled sandy daisies....
Shashendra Amalshan 2011
Yet another devilishly wonderful verse from your naive and creative pen full of anguish Shan.So much enjoyed this work.Sorry for taking much time to visit your page.Looks like I missed lot of them.
Another mystical tour round this world from your wonderful mystical library set in your clever head ending with a world filled with sandy daisy now thats a corker indeed..thanks for the humour....regards
As Fay comments this is a surreal trip and I love the elven hood and everything it is made up of, and I can picture it all thank you Shan. The imagery is vivid and moving filled with sound and your amazing imagination. Your lows and her highs makes for great juxtaposition and I enjoyed it thoroughly~
An enchanting write from your magic pen, dear Shan. Excellent visual detail, so crisp and striking. I love the phrase 'sandy daisies'........Beautiful! Thank you for sharing, I have so enjoyed reading. Blessings always.......
Impressive writing Shan.....I love the way you end this smooth flowing mystical poem
love this its everything beautiful
Your poem presents nice mystical imageries...imaginative write
A whimiscal trip into the land of surreal - I love this to bits Shan - you have the flow worked out just right and it captures attention to the last "sandy daisies."
hugely imaginative...reminds me of a Dali painting in its uniqueness, Shan