The Devil's Heaven
The devil
rejoicing
in ecstasy- dirty
dancing, boozing
and merry making…..
The devil
in happiness
clapping and leaping
in delight feasting…..
The devil dancing
in joy
to welcome
convicts to his
fiendish lagoon..
The sordid ghouls
singing romantic
duets with wailing
banshees,
the skeleton girls
moving to the phantom
drum beats….
the Orc girls
French kissing
and seducing
skeleton ghosts,
fluids swarming,
dungeons feasting,
the brutes gang-banging,
and monsters blood-feeding,
the hell in party mode….
As they stood
In ovation,
I- the Monstrous Convict-
moving slowly
with other convicts,
to my new refuge,
gazing up
at its blood soaked walls,
welcomed by singing ghouls,
wrapped in agony,
burdened with sinful handcuffs,
walking slowly
towards my torturous
chamber
to serve my life sentence
in Devil’s Sordid Heaven……
Shashendra Amalshan 2011
Your imagination has certainly run a crazed riot in this gimcrack evil poem. Ghastly and gory but clever and devilishly delicious and funny and fictitious (I hope) (lol) . You can't be outdone Shan, and have raised the bar in horror on Poetfreak once again - you Devil - You!
Once a devil, always a devil! A wonderful, descriptive write, in part it seemed more like Heaven than Hell, penned with your usual delightful sense of humour and fun, Shan. Your imagination is on fire in this skilled write and I have so enjoyed reading it. I wish you a very peaceful, blessed and Happy Christmas, Shan and a very wonderful, inspiration and laughter filled Happy New Year too, dear friend. Thank you for sharing. God bless you always......
devil remains as devil for ever!
Beautiful, some call heaven and some pronounce as hell Although two places both are powerful?
A fiendish description of all things evil Shan. - - a goulishly amusing read.
Sounds like fun to me Shan, I hope you enjoyed the walk. Your imagination in all its glory again, makes for a fun and enjoyable read. But I think I will remain in purgatory!!
Nice to read the way you describe Devils merry making...another interesting write in your unique imagination and style, Shan
Ha ha... A sharply crafted glimpse into the inferno. The devil ruling over hell? I gotta tell you this uncomfortably close to a description of a routine Saturday night in New Orleans : D
This is a saint's hell of a poem!! I'd really like to be in a heaven like that only to witness how the Orc girls seduce skeleton ghosts lol..Lots of innocent things to learn from this evil laughter of a heavenly poem.Brilliant work Shan!