Invitation*
Day and time
the Christmas Eve
the wonderful place
is Tel Aviv
divine drink
and soulful dance
ambiance
a filial fragrance
chief guest Santa
in rose red clad
its menu manna
to heart fill fed
I invite all
gals and guys
Santa will
give away the prize
have the music of the spheres
together friends
sing Christmas cheers......
*In response to FjR's query in his comment on 'My Bar Dance'.
RAJ NANDY
A nice place to meet , the commercial capital -Tel Aviv ! Read about the same , when I had composed the historical poem on Jerusalem ! Thanks for the invitation , -Raj
A nice place to meet , the commercial capital -Tel Aviv ! Read about the same , when I had composed the historical poem on Jerusalem ! Thanks for the invitation , -Raj
Chaos1214
Ha ha... Christmas in Tel Aviv? Who knew? : D
Ha ha... Christmas in Tel Aviv? Who knew? : D
La Finita
Wonderful place to visit. Great write!
Wonderful place to visit. Great write!
Lynda Robson
Sounds good to me ........... have fun
Sounds good to me ........... have fun
Cat
mark me down, sounds grand! Cat
mark me down, sounds grand! Cat
heather wilkins
Christmas in Tel Aviv sounds fun. nice write.
Christmas in Tel Aviv sounds fun. nice write.
PrEmJi PrEmJi
interesting, though it's expensive!
interesting, though it's expensive!
Marie
The story of Christmas Eve in Tel Aviv is so beautifully narrated, CP and delightful to read. You tell the story so well, it is like being there in person! I have enjoyed reading very much! Thank you for sharing. Christmas and New Year Blessings and Good Wishes to you....
The story of Christmas Eve in Tel Aviv is so beautifully narrated, CP and delightful to read. You tell the story so well, it is like being there in person! I have enjoyed reading very much! Thank you for sharing. Christmas and New Year Blessings and Good Wishes to you....
Sylvia Frances Chan
i 've been to lots of cities all over the world, but a very pity not yet to Tel Aviv, i don't know why, but now i know this poem, it makes me think: to go or not...i like the "Song-tune" and the rhyming at the beginning till the 13th line...a lovely poem, atmospheric, a real Christmas poem!
i 've been to lots of cities all over the world, but a very pity not yet to Tel Aviv, i don't know why, but now i know this poem, it makes me think: to go or not...i like the "Song-tune" and the rhyming at the beginning till the 13th line...a lovely poem, atmospheric, a real Christmas poem!
nimal dunuhinga
Fine! If the life can continue Christmas forever?
Fine! If the life can continue Christmas forever?
LightH2O
Very nice write about Christmas eve in Tel Aviv. sounds so much fun and full of cheer.
Very nice write about Christmas eve in Tel Aviv. sounds so much fun and full of cheer.
Wish you Merry Christmas!