Daily Love Dose - 9

We are the unheard echoes
that line the whistle of time .

We are the unseen dreams
that twinkle in starry eyes.

We are the unsketched silhoutte
that makes light feel sure .

We are the unsown seeds
that dare the grown up trees.

We are the the last dot
that makes sigma feel complete.

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Ken e Hall
We are the unsketched silhouette that makes light feel sure , perfect daily dose keep 'em coming, happy new year...regards
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Indira Renganathan
Surpassing glory ever your verses are since ph days Nikunj....God bless you and your family with a very Happy New Year and years ahead
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rema renjini nair
your wife is a lucky woman bring in the happy new year nikunj
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Ron Peat
The sign wave is the sound of eternity: God's voice if you will. The "S" curve is for sigma and for Sigma Octantis. The last distant star that make the constellation a constellation is the complete reaching for the infinite. Like this a lot Nikunj. A poet friend..RH Peat
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Shashendra Amalshan
ohh yeah, judging by the comments below people cant seem to get enough of your daily dose of love poetry.. Good read Nikunj
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Susan Jarvis
An elegant, exquisite, poetic dance of romance.
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Sylvia Frances Chan
i love these beautiful jewels! what an idea, brilliant!!
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Ron Peat
A continuance of 8 part 2 A poet friend...RH Peat
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rema renjini nair
this is beautiful poetry keep writing its a pleasure to read these daily intoxicating love doses niks
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sensebreeze
That's really profound, makes one sit up and think the eternal question, who are we?
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Shakespeares Waste Bin
Just lovely Nik poetry as it should be
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LightH2O
Lovely and true write.
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Karin Anderson
I am loving this Daily Dose-9 and feel privileged to share this beautiful poetry you have created for your wife. Each stanza is rich with metaphor and love, and the last two lines are my favorite~
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Pranab k chakraborty
Unique. Marvelous style of speaking possibilities. So lucid the expression could only be possible when realisation quiet flows from the soul.
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Sandra Martyres
A lovely poem Nikunj..this is a great series that you are pening..your imagery is as usual very impressive.
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