My Bar Dance
ha! ha!!
In my bar dance
Perpetual is romance
People from home and France
In dancer's eyes spirituality glance
ha! ha!!
It is an eternal dance
It's not a game of chance
You fall in love at first glance
Vast its dancing floor's expanse
ha! ha!!
In dance the divinity glitters
In dancers drink bowls no bitters
The dancers' lives without jitters
Their hearts are divine transmitters
ha! ha!!
Come and join my bar dance
This Christmas joyous trance
T A Ramesh
It makes me dance too!
It makes me dance too!
Sandra Martyres
I like the rhyming in this happy write spreading the Xmas cheer...
I like the rhyming in this happy write spreading the Xmas cheer...
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
I think CAT has your number, Doctor S....And, BTW, i'm still waiting on a time & place for that Bar Girl....Don't know why, but my bally-hoo instincts are telling me that the bar in this poem is the same as the bar in that other poem....Now, let's spread some Christmas Cheer, Dr. Sharma by coughing up the specifics! lol! Nicely Done, as always ~FjR~
I think CAT has your number, Doctor S....And, BTW, i'm still waiting on a time & place for that Bar Girl....Don't know why, but my bally-hoo instincts are telling me that the bar in this poem is the same as the bar in that other poem....Now, let's spread some Christmas Cheer, Dr. Sharma by coughing up the specifics! lol! Nicely Done, as always ~FjR~
Cat
Sounds like a party to be at! Have fun, I may saunter to be.. Cat
Sounds like a party to be at! Have fun, I may saunter to be.. Cat
narain, jay p.
Nice one. Great spirit to dance to.
Nice one. Great spirit to dance to.
RAJ NANDY
Sir, a nice message and an invitation to all for the Christmas Season ! -Raj
Sir, a nice message and an invitation to all for the Christmas Season ! -Raj
lovely rhythm and joyous poem...