My Bar
My bar is unique
A bar-less bar
Whoever joins it
Becomes a star
The rich or the poor
The Civilized or boor
Feelings don't injure
Equal treat assure
Color or the creed
Country or breed
Such ideas don't feed
Serves without greed
Bathed in divine light
Its visitors don't fight
In their drinks delight
Here Santa's gifts blithe
Bar girl in divinity shines
Serves the 'Soma' divine
Come here, dance and dine
Ill wills to Krishana consigne
aryaindia
Your concept and expression is bar-divine
Your concept and expression is bar-divine
Nightowl
Impressive. Wonderful structure here, with impeccable rhythm and rhyme. A fun read.
Impressive. Wonderful structure here, with impeccable rhythm and rhyme. A fun read.
La Finita
Sounds a wonderful place ! I wonder which bus , from Argentina will take me to the nearby. Lol! Lovely poem
Sounds a wonderful place ! I wonder which bus , from Argentina will take me to the nearby. Lol! Lovely poem
LightH2O
A very safe bar...nice write.
A very safe bar...nice write.
T A Ramesh
A Divine Bar to drink in mystical mood to divinity forever as in Krishna consciousness just like one in Nature as Wordsworth!
A Divine Bar to drink in mystical mood to divinity forever as in Krishna consciousness just like one in Nature as Wordsworth!
Bob Blackwell
This is my kind of bar, one I would recommend to my friends
This is my kind of bar, one I would recommend to my friends
Gita Ashok
An impressive write. Best lines: "Bathed in divine light/ Its visitors don't fight/ In their drinks delight/ Here Santa's gifts blithe."
An impressive write. Best lines: "Bathed in divine light/ Its visitors don't fight/ In their drinks delight/ Here Santa's gifts blithe."
Fay Slimm
An excellent bar with no bar to anyone dear friend. Good read.
An excellent bar with no bar to anyone dear friend. Good read.
C. P. Sharma
Mr. Dunuhinga, My Bar serves all without any charge, its heart is so large, lol
Mr. Dunuhinga, My Bar serves all without any charge, its heart is so large, lol
nimal dunuhinga
O the puritan's bar and I see my wallet if any change to have a sip?
O the puritan's bar and I see my wallet if any change to have a sip?
RAJ NANDY
Hard drinkers in the Bar must refill to recharge , but one who drinks the 'soma' divine , gets recharged for the rest of his life ! - Raj
Hard drinkers in the Bar must refill to recharge , but one who drinks the 'soma' divine , gets recharged for the rest of his life ! - Raj
Sandra Martyres
A very noble write....
A very noble write....
Lynda Robson
Cheers !!!!...... good write
Cheers !!!!...... good write
beautiful conceptSir, bar is a metaphor for your own generosity of spirit, and also a message that we can all be large hearted . beautiful rhythm and rhyme , full of joy and pride.