Daily Love Dose - 6
Silent love lifts large stones
that keep the day latched
under a night's burden.
Stars blink goodbye
only to meet again
amid the twilight blues .
Stamped with your whispers
sunbeams head straight
for my blessed abode .
Each moment is a promise
Each promise a metaphor
Each metaphor a poem
Each poem a genesis....
rema renjini nair
perfect gift for your wife they are excellent
perfect gift for your wife they are excellent
Cat
lovely.. How did I miss these ! Sigh I will go back to read!Cat
lovely.. How did I miss these ! Sigh I will go back to read!Cat
Ron Peat
wow You have a closure on this that is just profound and deep. You might want to capitalize the 'each" in the last stanza. Terrific poem Nikunj. That last line is a knife would of reality. If only every lover knew that and responded accordingly. Reborn each moment we become something unique with each new breath. a poet friend..RH Peat
wow You have a closure on this that is just profound and deep. You might want to capitalize the 'each" in the last stanza. Terrific poem Nikunj. That last line is a knife would of reality. If only every lover knew that and responded accordingly. Reborn each moment we become something unique with each new breath. a poet friend..RH Peat
heather wilkins
all of your daily love doses are excellent writing.
all of your daily love doses are excellent writing.
narain, jay p.
great composition.
great composition.
nimal dunuhinga
I was intoxicated!
I was intoxicated!
Fay Slimm
These doses of love-words spell out fervently in wonderful metaphor the depth of a close relationship Niks. - Another gem to add to your exciting collection.
These doses of love-words spell out fervently in wonderful metaphor the depth of a close relationship Niks. - Another gem to add to your exciting collection.
James T. Adair
love is your heart's nemesis
love is your heart's nemesis
And this is an exciting collection as Fay comments. Their is magic in your beautiful images and you share a relationship that is precious and blessed!