Thieves Can Be Animals...Ten Word Story

Patrick McFarland
God, I hope they didn't try to smoke them. Off bananas are a powerful hallucinogen (LOL).

Shashendra Amalshan
Good write Ken, as always even as you try to bring out strong message, you keep the witt and humour alive.. Clverly composed verse

LightH2O
Original 10 word humorous write with a message.

Karin Anderson
Great creative use of metaphor and hooded gorillas really get to me! I watched a TV program about synthetic drugs and they can't be tracked down, as a molecule can be changed so they can't be proven to be a drug. Well done Ken and "under the influence of bananas" is clever writing too~

Elena S
Why young people would need drugs? .. to be happy?What kids really wish for? If we dig a bit we may find the wrongs of this society, we may find the answers of a new world. Great poem thank you for share.

Ken e Hall
So many robberies by young people for money for drugs is in epidermic proportions, a madness in today's society when will it end.

RAJ NANDY
Humour with a message KEN ! -Raj

Ben Gieske
Great choice of words and imaginative combination of images and thoughts.

Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful...hooded gorillas? yes; nothing could have been more expressive in enforcing your theme