My Bar Girl

In her eyes
There is glow
From her gait
Divinity flows

In her hands
The Soma bowl
Serves with love
Greatly consoles

Rose in her cheeks
will never fade
Her honeyed lips
Soul capturing shade

In her smile
The serenity sails
She sings like
Sweet nightingale

In her looks
Infinity trace
In her heart, no
dearth of space

She welcomes all
With open arms
In her embrace
The Divine Charm

Added later responding to comments:

Just your entry into the bar purifies
She is close to your heart, just try
She is so divine, your spirits uplift
She is just a Santa's Christmas gift.

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Amy Cavanaugh
A great description of somebody...well done! A bar seems like it would fill my senses too :)
 
Anu a
Beautiful piece...Great write!!!
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La Finita
This poem flows musically, romantic and real heart-felt. Lovely!
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nimal dunuhinga
Great! Every man's dream a divine bar girl who smells Wine!
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T A Ramesh
This beautiful pop song singer girl reminds me of the old movie, Howrah Bride with Madubalah singing on the stage welcoming all !
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Sandra Martyres
Truly the ideal woman - and as Samanyan says - a dream woman! Nice write
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samanyan
true the ultimate dream of every man
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C. P. Sharma
Thanks friends, Just by your entry into the bar purifies/ She is close to your heart, you just try/ She is so divine, your spirits uplift/ She is just a Santa's Christmas gift.
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RAJ NANDY
Sir this 'apsara' from heaven - will put all our earthly bar girls to shame ! - Raj
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Lynda Robson
sounds like the ideal woman :)
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heather wilkins
the total feminine package.
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poeticpiers reborn again
The ultimate dream of every man
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James T. Adair
Dreams are free; Far fetched but Free! Sounds like someone I'd like to know too
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Cat
sound of smitten, Cat
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