Daily Love Dose - 3

Daily love dose -3 

A grateful metaphor offers
to connect the dots 
as I pick your whispers
from the rustling leaves.

A simlie points 
to the engraved names
on the willows 
by the youthful brook.

An epiphanic ripple 
sends the mind 
down the same groovy path 
that's still green with passion.

The poem is completed
with a divine smile 
as the doorkeeper confirms
my stay in the love cage 

till eternity ...

3rd december 2011.

Philip
This series does you credit my Friend. Why not string them end to and and publish them as one long journal? Yes beautiful work ! Kind Regards. Philip

Ron Peat
well written my poet friend. Every encounter is a poem. And love is the reward for each encounter if you allow it into your life. A Poet friend....RH peat

samanyan
a lovely romance there nikunj

heather wilkins
great poem. excellent writing.

Shakespeares Waste Bin
Another masterpiece Niks

wombat
Love every part of this poem.

narain, jay p.
nice metaphors. Great eternal love epic.