be
when you feel that
you are standing under a shower
of flowers
or
blending in to a gown woven from
pearly moonbeams
and yes
soothing as the sensuous warmth
of potent wine
then
maybe just a smiling
universe glowing with a million stars
simply
anything that
makes you float weightlessly
soulfully
is that feeling
of pure joy ..
Ravi Sathasivam
Excellent write. tfs
Excellent write. tfs
Debs
OOOh wow to this excellent write.
OOOh wow to this excellent write.
Anu a
wow!!!Excellent poem...loved it!!!
wow!!!Excellent poem...loved it!!!
narain, jay p.
excellent write.
excellent write.
Nikunj
Subtle , grand and eloquent I must say . The state of being with yourself , enjoying the morsels of delight that well up from within .....this is beautifully crafted ...wow is the word.
Subtle , grand and eloquent I must say . The state of being with yourself , enjoying the morsels of delight that well up from within .....this is beautifully crafted ...wow is the word.
Ben Gieske
Wonderfully expressed and imaged.
Wonderfully expressed and imaged.
tom balch
I´m with Fay, eloquent, loved it.
I´m with Fay, eloquent, loved it.
poeticpiers reborn again
Just to be is a miracle but few realise it
Just to be is a miracle but few realise it
Fay Slimm
An eloquent write - - so full of beautifully expressive metaphor. Well done.
An eloquent write - - so full of beautifully expressive metaphor. Well done.
LightH2O
Such beautiful imagery and lovely feelings this write creates. tfs
Such beautiful imagery and lovely feelings this write creates. tfs
alive, living each moment joyfully; beautiful images Rema just to be... soulful penning