Angels Without Wings
Careful as you hold this heart it
contains a never setting sun, it
radiates a warmth with all the
love it's won.
It will light your night those
dark and dismal days, fill
those longing dreams in oh
so many ways.
Encapsulating memories and
the ever waiting future, the
constant thought of you an
eternity shall nurture.
Careful as you sip and not the
desire spill, the contents of
each droplet your life to ever
fill
Chaos1214
Lyrically incisive. The tragedy of losing something so dear to so useless an omission as thoughtlessness.
Lyrically incisive. The tragedy of losing something so dear to so useless an omission as thoughtlessness.
Elena S
Magnetic force of love, such a romantic power in your write, I think even the butterfingers would try to clench on the glass of this beautiful heart. Thank you dear friend, glad to see your lovely poems back.
Magnetic force of love, such a romantic power in your write, I think even the butterfingers would try to clench on the glass of this beautiful heart. Thank you dear friend, glad to see your lovely poems back.
Sandra Martyres
Welcome back Chris, what a beautiful romantic write this is!
Welcome back Chris, what a beautiful romantic write this is!
Munia Khan
As ever a beautiful piece full of romance Shakes.Love it so much.
As ever a beautiful piece full of romance Shakes.Love it so much.
tom balch
A wonderfully penned romantic write, Chris. Great to see you posting again.
A wonderfully penned romantic write, Chris. Great to see you posting again.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So tender a plea...wonderfully written, like a love song. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
So tender a plea...wonderfully written, like a love song. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Jenny Gordon
Delightfully poignant and endearing, yet will it also forgive my trembling butterfingers, and can it handle mistreatment? It is a precious treasure too darling to break, and yet I am ever so faulty. I love this sweet call, it tugs the heartstrings in a charming way, so irresistible. Wonderful.
Delightfully poignant and endearing, yet will it also forgive my trembling butterfingers, and can it handle mistreatment? It is a precious treasure too darling to break, and yet I am ever so faulty. I love this sweet call, it tugs the heartstrings in a charming way, so irresistible. Wonderful.
LightH2O
Each heart must be handled with care and specially your beautiful heart. Beautifully written.
Each heart must be handled with care and specially your beautiful heart. Beautifully written.
Dream Weaver
sighs...now that is exactly what has been missing around here just lately! Pure and simple romance!! well done Chris:)
sighs...now that is exactly what has been missing around here just lately! Pure and simple romance!! well done Chris:)
Ron Peat
Nice one Willy bard. The strength of heart is un-daunting. And in the closing "careful as you sip" "each droplet your life to ever fill". Just magic to read . Thanx for sharing. Missed you for awhile. I was looking for you and couldn't find your site. Glad to see you're back on. And thanx for dropping by. A poet friend...RH Peat
Nice one Willy bard. The strength of heart is un-daunting. And in the closing "careful as you sip" "each droplet your life to ever fill". Just magic to read . Thanx for sharing. Missed you for awhile. I was looking for you and couldn't find your site. Glad to see you're back on. And thanx for dropping by. A poet friend...RH Peat
carol
romantic as ever such a awesome offer
romantic as ever such a awesome offer
Simply Bono Razek
oozes pure romance & love-Shakes...& shines with great beauty...
oozes pure romance & love-Shakes...& shines with great beauty...
Karin Anderson
Wonderful to see you back Chris. I adore the scope, imagery and romance in this beautiful poem~
Wonderful to see you back Chris. I adore the scope, imagery and romance in this beautiful poem~
kath
A constant heart is a rare and beautiful thing Chris, and yours is writ large in this wonderful poem. Like Fay, I simply have to reread and recommend. :) kath xxx
A constant heart is a rare and beautiful thing Chris, and yours is writ large in this wonderful poem. Like Fay, I simply have to reread and recommend. :) kath xxx
Meggie Gultiano
wow..and wow again!!
wow..and wow again!!
wombat
If this does not say the world about your soul nothing ever will. Great write, beautifully done.
If this does not say the world about your soul nothing ever will. Great write, beautifully done.
Fay Slimm
Wow - - a wonderful return to posting with this more than romantic verse Chris. It needs re-reading so am Recommending.
Wow - - a wonderful return to posting with this more than romantic verse Chris. It needs re-reading so am Recommending.
I like the ballad cadence to this poem. The internal rhyme scheme works very well for me.