Ice Box

Everything seems so cold right here
Where I stand is not actually clear
I Can feel the autumn air in my lungs
My heart is a ice box
I cant feel my tongue
My frozen fingers to my toes
There's no way my blood will flow
I try to hold my breath
So I can explode
Into a thousand frozen pieces
Hoping I will melt when it gets warm

Raj Arumugam
you've used imagery to great effect in your poem, Ismael...the poem's mood is created effectively...

PrEmJi PrEmJi
read some great poems!