New Dawn

When the dream is over
from the sleep I shall rise,
Death will bring new dawn
In myriad colors new guise.

Here epitaph will be written
A sad requiem will be sung
There red carpet will spread
Saluting march past swung.

Uniting with the Divine
In His glory I will shine
Time-space won't torment
I will be on the cloud nine.

Juan Olivarez
Great poem, reminds me of what the great French writer Guy De Maupasant wrote, "Do we see the hundred thousandth part of what exists."

Cat
Lovely poem, I agree, I like this life, But to know the other side will be divine! Cat

Meggie Gultiano
beautifully expressed..very inspiring

narain, jay p.
Great wisdom write. Unity with divine and being on cloud nine .. great metaphors.

 

Anu a
Great write Sir..

T A Ramesh
Death will give us freedom we are dreaming about! That we may say as heaven!

samanyan
a very spiritual write on death...i too wrote a tanka on death

RAJ NANDY
A great write Sir ! I loved the last stanza the most ! Thanks for sharing , -Raj

Lynda Robson
Good write about life's journey and the hereafter

Gita Ashok
A well-inked, meaningful write on life's sojourn that many of us ponder on. I like the rhyme and flow. The last stanza outshines the rest.

Sandra Martyres
A spiritual piece so well composed....

mamta agarwal
a poem of total acceptance of march of time anf union with Divine. thanks Sir. very spiritual write